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Well..

I'm not really into Midi files, but I could see that being in a game. 4/5, 7/10.

CB7 responds:

Oh, thanks!

Hmm

M4 sound is way to loud at the start

To much reverb on the I-115T.

Not bad overall.

Liked the part @1:00

I could see this in a vid game.

Ya, I could see this as a video game song.

Fair classification you had ~.~ ...

It is nothing overwhelming, but thats the point in a Video Game song.. You don't want to block out the main sound effects and such. I dig.

8/10
4/5.

Kassich responds:

i think your exactly spot on about not getting in the way of the main sound effects in a game. thanks for the review!

Respect.

That lead is crazy shit.

I like it.

The 2nd lead at 1:10 doesn't fit as well as it could.. I feel.

I still like it though. ^_^

9/10
5/5

Sure the name shouldn't be PLUR? ^_^..

Kassich responds:

i get what your saying about the lead. it doesn't fit that well cuz i was trying to see if i could get a tight sound with just hitting somewhat random keys, and that's kinda what it turned into, so it wasn't really written for the song, just a thing i wanted to try out thanks for the review

Well..

The beatboxing itself isn't that grand, but it doesn't need to be.

Pretty sick as a loop, I'd bet - and I'd think it'd fit well with many songs.

Gratz.

4/5
9/10.

3D-xelu responds:

thanks ^.^

Mmm.

Starts with Lightspeed, which is ok since its slowed down and doesnt sound as generic as it could.. However the transistion @ 0:24/0:34 the hats in general at 0:15 just don't sound correct. To loud, not the right hats for this song. Download a sound pack. Seems to be a very generic song, basically. I used Eurogate as my lead in Reverberation, so I can't pound you for using Eurogate and Lightspeed... But try to use different insturments.. which you did, I guess.. as the lead - however, Euro/Light stand out - to me at least.

Try to put more varitation in. It seems the whole thing could be made from only like 6 patterns, thought im sure you used more.

Overall, a fine song though.

Tight

Try to take out those crashes though. Lead up to them or something. Besides that, sick.

Hmm. Transitions p10x?

Work on the transitioning, some things just kinda popped out of nowhere, like @ 0:16 seconds. It doesn't flow in, make a transition to it. I like how at 0:55 you put in the snare transition to the kicks. Do stuff like that.
1:15 - hats.. Again, transitions please.
Overall pretty good.
Really liked part @ 2:00, however i'm not sure if it fit well. Let me guess : you had two different loops that sounded good and you combined them? They only sound mediocore in the same song together.
The voice adds interest to it.

Check out mah stufz0r if you are bored >..<

Teh Bass was hella loud lol.
-Yes, I listened to the whole thing before rating-

zlarke responds:

haha thanks for the advice :D

Im still new at this tho, its only my 3rd full song. But really thanks alot, ill try to work on the transitions as others have said X.X

-zlarke-

Sounded Kinda Sickly

The song sounded very sick.. Maybe try different instruments.. The Snare is totally distorted, is that what you were looking for? The Guitar sound was just way way distorted also. I'm under the impression if you tried again with better instruments or exported at a higher quality it'd be better.

I use FL Studio to create music. Listen p10x!

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