teleiaskentix's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smooth Bit 2]

Well.

The lead wasn't very loud at all.
It was lacking in the background, but I loved it.
You can make that better.

9/10
5/5

[Imitati0n]

For being unfinished ...

It isn't bad. I'm not intrigued enough to go look at the original, but you seemed to have done a pretty fair job.

[Ominous times]

Hmmmm..

Maybe a different instrument..
And that was a not-very-inspired beat. Make a better beat please ^^ I can tell you're capable.

flamingninja777 responds:

Haha, thanks. Like I said, this is an older one I forgot to put up, I wasn't as good then. I'll put something better up in a day or two.

[Bad Synchrony]

Timing

Im not sure you had the timing right on the entry for your hats at the start and also that lead sound.

Try to throw some variation in .. starts getting boring at 1:00.
Try throwing the velocity of your hats/cymbals.

1:45 lead sound is just not the same song. It sounds like a bad mash of 2 other songs. Try to transition it better (i.e. fade in)

Same at 2:30. It just comes back in. Sounds ok when it all comes together, but transition, yet again. Fade it in, Reverse a cymbal crash to get a lead up sound.. or something.

The loop piano/bell sounds gets a little annoying, but not as much as it would be if you didn't make a good roll on the pattern for it.

So overall.. work on the timing, and the transitions. I liked the individual loops though.

7/10, 4/5.

Work on the beginning too.

H-P1 responds:

Thk u so much!!!

[**==CatchyLittleLoop==**]

Uplifting ^^

xD its uplifting. It makes me wanna say.. "yay".

[Just to Explode]

Depth

I think you need to put some atmospherical pad behind the song or something, it was lacking totally in depth, there was at most 3 layers, to much empty space.

It was also kinda quiet, but maybe thats my fault. And I didn't hear the lyrics at all T_T ..

Monkanian responds:

I understand what you mean, but I was going for simple. And the Voice, well I'm anal... and I have a crappy mic. So it was a bad combo. "Never louder then lovely" my choir instructor always said. So I cut the volume of the voice a little.

[bEPP]

OK, but lacking in depth

Its very slow and doesn't have that much in it.

I actually did listen to the whole song.

3/5, 7/10.

jUMPYm4X responds:

thanks for the 7. JERK!!!
lol jk.

[Vendetta (Loop)]

Uhm

This is supposed to be a 2:20 loop?
Got kinda boring around 1:20.
Really boring around 1:40.

Try and add some stuff to it, its a good base but you need to add.

[Don't Do Drugs]

Lol....

Ok, I can tell you were bored.

But uh the lyrics weren't very high quality or inspirational or even inspired.

If it had been an honest attempt at making music I'd give it like a 2/10 or something; but like said, product of boredom.